very bad match

Player name: 
toki85
Player rank: 
17k
Player color: 
White
Opponent name: 
manuzumazu
Opponent rank: 
16k
Review status: 
reviewed
Reviewer: 
Review rating: 
4
Review instructions: 

in the battle in the right corner i guess is where i lost the game even if the time wasn't over. how could i fix my position there? thanks

Game summary: 

Hi, I hope my comments will help you a bit :)
Your general problem is that you create too many single groups that you opponent can seperate and then attack very easyli.
Try to create more bigger groups which have enaugh eye-space :)

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Comments

Thanks ihmsje,
For the great review! You managed to find the balance between commenting on some moves and showing some variations but not overwhelming toki with too much information.